Having a compelling story is crucial for your fundraiser’s success. A good fundraiser story will do two things: make donors feel connected to your cause and inspire trust.
It’s best to begin your story with a few short sentences that contain the most important information. You can think of this as a brief summary of exactly why you are raising funds. After that, you can provide more background information that will paint a broader picture of why you’re crowdfunding. Fred and Paul followed this format when they wrote the story for their fundraiser, “Help Fred & Paul Save the Universe.” This made it easy for readers to understand immediately why they’re asking for help. Their fundraiser raised more than $44,000.
Your story should clearly explain the reason behind your fundraiser, because this helps build trust with your donors. A vague story may not inspire confidence. Ryan Dunn used bolded text in his fundraiser story to emphasize exactly how people could help his sister, and raised more than $100,000. Read his story “Sister Paralyzed w/ Rare Condition” for inspiration.
Be sure to include important information like:
- Who you are.
- How you’re connected to the beneficiary (if you’re not raising money for yourself).
- Exactly how you plan on using the donations. Listing a budget is a great way to be transparent and gain your donors’ trust.
Here are some other pointers:
- Make sure your story isn’t too long or too short. We’ve found that writing a minimum of 400 words can help your fundraiser’s visibility. Learn more in our blog post on building your fundraiser with a title and your story.
- If your fundraiser is to help with a difficult situation, explain how you’ve tried to overcome it yourself. Donors may feel more charitable if it seems like you’ve exhausted all other options.
- Allow donors to connect with your story by being vulnerable. If your fundraiser is for an emergency situation, describe the emotions associated with it, like fear or uncertainty. If you’re fundraising for something positive or exciting, describe how much it means to you. This encourages empathy in your donors and helps them understand how much their help means.
- Ask a trusted friend for feedback on your fundraiser story.
Take a look at our blog post for a comprehensive guide on writing a fundraiser story. Still stuck? We’ve got an enhanced story tool. Start writing around 50 words and then click “Enhance”. We’ll make suggestions around word choice, grammar, and tone to help improve your fundraising story.